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I am Atlantic fog around iron hulls-
A wall of roiling impossibility.
I am liquid, glacial air
Surrounding him
To find all his cracks and fill them
Until he pulls aside the shades
To beam through my incorporeality.

Shattered, I slide down into his sunshine mouth
To rest and burn away in the molten light.
A poem written as part of a "ping pong poetry" project with a member of my Pendragons Writing Guild.

This one stems from bitter-sweet emotions.

Comments and suggestions are more than welcome :)
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colorscarlet Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
reads really smoothly. stands alone strongly and makes me want to know more of the story. nicely done!
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kudos-praze Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much :)
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colorscarlet Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
you're very welcome- looking forward to more of your writing
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